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The Whispers of Us by ~IceWolf67:iconIceWolf67:



Note: all " - " phrases are resembling a deep whisper in my mind

I hear the voices
    -The whispers
Telling me I’m wrong
    -We’re right
Wanting me to turn around
    -Come back
But I’m afraid, for then they
    -The voices
Will have faces that will
    -Torture you
Show emotions that can
    -Burn you
Voices having bodies to
    -Bring you down
Hands on my throat choking
    -Suffocating me
Feet and legs to run after me
    -You’ll never escape us

This night mare begins and ends
    -Then begins again
I see illusions and confusions
    -But never any conclusions

A darkened room, no existing light
    -All angels forbidden
The darkness so thick my flame only shows
    -Part of us
So I held the flame closer to
    -Our heart
Boom Boom Flash! The flame goes out
    -Flashes again and light splatters on the walls
And the monsters surround me
    -The other side of us
Boom Boom Flash! The flame goes out
    -Flashes again and we see all
And then I see me, surrounding me
    -The other side of “we”

This night mare begins and ends
    -Then begins again
©2004-2009 ~IceWolf67
:iconicewolf67:

Author's Comments

this is kinda something relatred to an actuall vision/illusion in my mind, like images or thoughts i had

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:iconrebelvampire:
OMG! this poem makes me wanna cry!

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:paranoid: I feel watched...
You're planning my demise aren't you?
:iconicewolf67:
hehe, thnx

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~Ice Wolf~Even when death takes my last breath, I'll find a way to still take yours!~
:iconrebelvampire:
np

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:paranoid: I feel watched...
You're planning my demise aren't you?
:iconrazor-the-fox:
Me likes, guud jorb.

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"Do you have any waffles?"
:iconicewolf67:
thnx

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~Ice Wolf~Even when death takes my last breath, I'll find a way to still take yours!~
:iconfire-foxie:
oh very nice loves it! ^_^
:iconicewolf67:
hehe ^^ thnx

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~Ice Wolf~Even when death takes my last breath, I'll find a way to still take yours!~
:iconfire-foxie:
welcomes more! ^__^
:iconrin-sdl:
wow, cool. after I read through this once I looked through it again and with some slight tweaking that would make a GREAT song!!!

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"It's just like a dream. Humans are that unbelieveable! Come... Come already! Alexander Anderson. Stand before me just like that man,Abraham Van Helsing! I want to see you standing tall among the entrails of my heart.
Come... and end my interval between

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September 21, 2004
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